Sorry for taking so long to continue this series. I have had a very busy few months! So the feedback that I got for the song was that musically the song sounded good. Theologically it was sound and I had stuck to the underlying message for the song. Through the critiquing process it was suggested that the song could do with a second verse. I did come up with a second verse but in the end I felt that it would have taken away from the first verse and perhaps the second verse was another song in itself.
I want to get a recording of this song as soon as possible now, I believe it is a message that needs to be heard. The next part of the journey is to settle on a the vibe that I want the song to have, this again forms and shapes the song further. I have now tweaked the song and sent it to my friend Matt, I’m waiting to hear what he comes up with. I’ll let you hear it as soon as I can.